Manuscript Status: Finished
Mentor Name: Jen Vincent
Mentee Name: Anika Fajardo
Title: WHAT IF A FISH
Category: Middle Grade
Genre: Contemporary #OwnVoices
Word Count: 33,000 words
Eddie Aguado is convinced winning the Arne Hopkins Dock Fishing Tournament will bring him closer to his dad who died when Eddie was four. With his father’s fishing gear, help from his older half-brother, and his trusty encyclopedia, he’s up for the challenge. But when an ailing grandmother in Colombia takes him miles from home, Eddie finds himself far from ready—and even further from his father.
The water by the shore smells like the bottom of the garbage pail after I take out the trash. I scrunch up my nose. Clomping on the wooden boards, I head to one end of the T-shaped dock. A father with a small child points across the lake and a man in a dirty blue cap blasts country music from an old radio. I lean my elbows on the railing and pull a smooth metal disc out of my pocket, running my thumb over the engraved letters. I don’t have to look at the words to know what they say. Eduardo Aguado León. My father.
“What are you doing?” someone says so loudly I can’t pretend I didn’t hear.
I drop my father’s medal back into my pocket and stare. It’s the purple-haired girl from the get-to-know-you games at day camp this morning. She was hard to miss.
“Quiet,” I say. “You’ll scare the fish.”
“Oh, and that thing won’t?” She nods her chin toward the radio.
She has a point.
“What’s that?” she asks. She’s looking at the flyer stapled to the railing where my elbows rest. The 14th Annual Arne Hopkins Dock Fishing Tournament—the one I have just decided I’m going to win.
I’d love to read this! Please send as a Microsoft Word document to brent(@)triadaus(.)com. So excited!
I love your voice and this story and I cannot wait to read on! Please send a query, synopsis, and the full manuscript (Word documents will suffice) to firstname.lastname@example.org — and don’t forget to mention #PitchWars in your subject line. Thanks—looking forward to my read!
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Hi Anika – as a life-long angler myself, I was immediately intrigued by the concept, and I love this open evoking the sights (and smells) of the dock! Please email your query with full ms attached as a Word doc to firstname.lastname@example.org with PitchWars Request + WHAT IF A FISH in the subject line. Thanks!
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I love what I’ve read so far and can’t wait to see the rest. Can you send the full manuscript and query to me? email@example.com Please put Pitch Wars request in the subject line to pull it to the top of my reading list!
This sounds lovely. I would love to see more! Will you please send a query letter, bio, and first 15 pages to firstname.lastname@example.org? Please use “Pitch Wars Req – WHAT IF A FISH” in the subject line.
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I’m already so captivated by the sample you’ve shared above! Please could you send the first 50 attached in a word document? I would really appreciate it if you would label your query REQUESTED: Pitch Wars and label the document with your last name and the title.
Thank you so much! I can’t wait to dive in!
I really like the premise and writing and would love to read on! Please send a query, first 100 pages and synopsis to email@example.com. I look forward to reading!
-Christa Heschke, McIntosh & Otis
This sounds really great–I love the voice in the opening scene and would love to read more. Could you please send me the first 50 pages as an attachment and include the query in the body of the email along with: REQUESTED PitchWars in the subject line? firstname.lastname@example.org
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Bradford Literary Agency
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