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12. SKIDSTER – Middle Grade Futuristic Science Fiction

Monday, 3 November 2014  |  Posted by Brenda Drake

Assorted_Uzi_Water_Guns_lgMentor: Naomi Hughes

Mentee: Lindsey Duga


Category: Middle Grade

Genre: Futuristic Science Fiction

Word Count: 67,000


During an illegal race, futuristic skateboarder Jed Tank crashes into an alley and accidentally witnesses a blackmail transaction—which leads to the murder of his best friend’s grandpa. Unable to let it go, Jed is sucked into the scummy underworld of Skid City’s crime lords, where he unravels a plot that will bring the city to its knees.


Everything about this trick came down to a formula. I’d already calculated it a block ago, right after seeing the wind speed in the top right corner of my goggles—15 miles per hour—and my own speed in the top left corner—57 miles per hour. Hmm. My mouth twitched into a small smirk. C’mon Jed, you can do better than that, ya slowpoke.

I tucked my shoulders in and dropped my knees slightly, commanding my body to tighten and create the least wind resistance possible. The skoard under my boots hummed with energy and sunrays bounced off its metal plating as my shadow moved with me. Just this small movement was enough to make the digital green number in the top left corner of my goggles shoot up by six. Sixty-three miles per hour.

My lips pulled back into a full-tooth grin. I could work with that.

Angry wind screamed in my ears as I bent my legs and felt the hum of the copper pipe under my skoard. I could see the railing on the next building over, but I forced my senses to stay in the present. Listening to the shhh sound of the skid-tech surface of my skoard meeting the sleek pipe, feeling my shirt whip against my sweaty arms and chest as the wind threatened to throw me off balance.

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  • Laura Cummings says:

    Hi Lindsey,

    Underground sci-fi skateboard races? I’m liking the concept! Could you please send your query letter, synopsis, and first 10 pages to querylaurie(at)fuseliterary(dot)com? Please make sure to include the subject “Pitch Wars: SKIDSTER” so I remember to give this priority. And to clarify, I am Laurie McLean’s assistant and am requesting this on her behalf, so go ahead and address the materials to her.

    Thank you so much!
    Laura Cummings

  • Louise Fury says:

    I definitely need to read this one! Please send the full manuscript as a .doc attachment, with your query as page one, to furyqueries @ thebentagency.com. For the subject line, put PITCH WARS: YOUR TITLE. Thanks!

  • Hello Lindsey, I really like the concept. Different is right up my alley. Please send your query and 3 chapters as an attachment to queries@belcastroagency.com. Thanks, Ella Marie Shupe

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