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PW #103: Adult Historical Fiction: THE LAND BETWEEN KINGS

Wednesday, 2 November 2016  |  Posted by Heather Cashman

Manuscript Status: FINISHED

Mentor Name: Carrie Callaghan
Mentee Name: Eileen Haas
Category: Adult
Genre: Historical Fiction
Word Count: 94,000


In Viking-occupied Ireland, outcast jurist Cathal investigates a murder for the Irish king, unbeknownst to his Norse employer. Meanwhile, Norsewoman Ragna guards a dangerous secret that will entangle her in Cathal’s inquiry. As war looms, Cathal must play both sides or end up dead—and Ragna’s freedom depends on his silence.


Cathal rubbed his eyes with one ink-stained hand and adjusted the two law books on the trestle table in front of him. The air inside King Ivar’s hall clogged his nose with heat and wood-smoke. All day Cathal had been hearing cases, and one remained. Against the far wall, Ivar sat in his high seat speaking with one of his men. The Norse king came when Cathal heard cases so he could be seen—and feared—by his Irish subjects.

“Who’s next?” Cathal said in Norse, which he had learned as a boy in the monastery. Still, the slight catch of his accent betrayed his native Irish.

A few people yet remained in the hall, mostly traders lingering to exchange gossip after paying their taxes. In the corner a young man shepherded a woman and a small child. At the authoritative clip of Cathal’s voice, the man glanced around, flummoxed. He wore a cloak in the Irish style, the colorful wool pinned to one shoulder, and the woman had a cross around her neck.

“Are you here for a case?” Cathal said in the Munster dialect of Irish.

“Are you the jurist?” the man said. “Cathal mac Finn?”

Cathal’s eyes stung and his back was sore from the backless bench. He tapped his fingers on the table-top, casting a purposeful glance at his books.

“Yes,” he said. “I am.”

The young man took a step forward. “I have a case to bring against one of the foreigners.”


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  • Laura says:

    Vikings and Irish kings! Yes, please! Could you send me the official query in the body of the email, the first 50 pages in an attached Word doc, with “Pitch Wars Request” in the subject line to laura(at)triadaus(dot)com? Thank you!

  • Pam says:

    Hey! I’d love to see the query and the first six chapters. pam@d4eo.com

  • Ohhh! You had me at Vikings in Ireland! I’d love to read the first 100 pages of this if you would please send as a Word attachment. You can email me directly at carrie(at)prospectagency(dot)com. If you would put PITCH WARS in the subject and the query in the body of the email that would be great. Excited to read more!!

  • Margaret Bail says:

    Vikings are a weakness of mine, so I’d love to see some more of this. Please send a query, 2-3 page synopsis in the body of the email, and first 50 pages as a Word attachment. Email me directly at: margaret(at)inklingsliterary(dot)com, and put PITCH WARS in the subject line. Thanks!

  • Danielle Barthel says:

    Would love to read more! Please send the first 50 pages and query to query@newleafliterary.com with subject line: Pitch Wars Submission Danielle. Thanks!

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