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Bonus Auction Item 1: First 5 Pages Critique by Lara Edits

Tuesday, 14 July 2015  |  Posted by Brenda Drake

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About this item: A first five pages critique “Voice Enhancer” substantive edits.

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Hailing from the arid highlands of Colorado, Lara Willard graduated with highest honors in Interdisciplinary Studies (Literature, Writing, Editing, and Design) from the University of Northwestern. She writes poetry, contemporary short fiction, and fantasy novels. Lara lives in Minnesota with her husband, sons, and dog-show dropout Havanese.

See her editor bio here.

Will not edit certain scenes or genres. No erotica or horror novels. Please no erotic or rape scenes* in any genre. No explicit descriptions of crimes against children. Please no racist, sexist, or sociopathic protagonists—She really doesn’t want to live in their heads. Lewd humor is not for her. For graphic novels, please note if any content is NSFW.


TURNAROUND TIME allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Brenda Drake provide the critique.

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