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Auction Item 16: Query + Synopsis + 1st 3 Chapters Critique for YA by Brianna Shrum

Tuesday, 14 July 2015  |  Posted by Brenda Drake

A hand of a young woman gives a heart as a Valentine's Day gift before a red background.

About this item: A query, synopsis, and first 3 chapters (up to 35 pages) for a young adult manuscript.

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BriannaBrianna Shrum

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Brianna is a lover of words. Sometimes weird ones. Sometimes bloody ones. Sometimes kissy ones. She tries not to discriminate. Also, all things nerdy. Odds are, if they talk about it on The Big Bang Theory, she likes it. Star Wars, superheroes, gaming, you name it. Much to the dismay of her much cooler younger sisters. She lives in fantabulous Colorado with her hubs and two boys, all of whom are pretty awesome.(It’s pretty testosteroney around there. SO. MANY. BOY.) Sometimes, she blogs about writerly things. She’s an author of YA fiction, and she LOVES what she does.

She’s represented by Josh Adams at Adams Literary. Her book NEVER NEVER releases September 22, 2015.  Add it on Goodreads here!  Preorder on Amazon here!


TURNAROUND TIME allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Brenda Drake provide the critique.

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