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Auction Item 11: 50 pages manuscript critique by Kelly Calabrese

Tuesday, 14 July 2015  |  Posted by Brenda Drake

A hand of a young woman gives a heart as a Valentine's Day gift before a red background.

About this item: A 50 pages manuscript critique, including feedback on: Characters, pacing, stakes, hook, voice, and tension.

Donated by …

V6NCGMlKKelly Calabrese

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Kelly Calabrese lives each day as a creative spirit. She began performing in children’s theatre at the age of 7 and takes ongoing acting classes with Sande Shurin in NYC. She studied improv at The People’s Improv Theater (The PIT NYC), performed on their house team, appeared in many comedy sketches, independent short films, and has written her own one woman murder mystery called “Wasn’t Me.”

In addition to acting, Kelly received a BA in Creative Writing from Binghamton University as well as a BA in Psychology. Major life accomplishments include climbing Mount Fuji off-season and scuba diving with sharks in the Caribbean.

Currently, Kelly is a spokesperson for AT&T, and an on-camera host for RealTVfilms.com and Hollyscoop TV. She interviews celebrities while learning how to NOT trip on the red carpet.


TURNAROUND TIME allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Brenda Drake provide the critique.

Filed: Misc

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